This was written about a picture of a girl I saw on  the  web over 12 months ago now just before I joined the bay. When I posted it here it didnt even get a comment. So here goes. Hope you like it better this time  


The Wisp Of Dark Hair by M.A.Meddings

The wisp of dark hair,
That has not a care,
For red satin ribbons,and lace.
Whilst in damnation ire,
It serves to conspire,
To gently caress your face.
And yet, with what style,
It doth softly beguile,
This fragile and trembling heart,
Such beautiful eyes, that sparkle and shine,
As you, ignore me and take me apart.
Unaware, I exist
Nor cannot resist,
Coolly disdainful of me,
And your soft freckled face,
In the end will embrace,
The Enraptured, haunting of me.





Poetry by lastromantichero The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2006-10-13 at 17:35

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Kathy Lockhart
The flow is so soft just like the feelings you express about this lovely girl. I am amazed how pictures can evoke so much beautiful poetry from you. You are truly an artist!
2006-10-13


Angel_in_disguise
that's really pure...and beautiful
2006-10-13


Malin Johansson
This is so lovely, hope that you got some respond and comments this time :))
Many big regards to you
~~ cyber daughter
2006-10-13


David Hazell
Yep! .. but with a nic like yours it had to be good. nothing less would do. Love it.
2006-10-13


keith nunes
haunting indeed!
2006-10-13


Phyllis J. Rhodes
As you ignore me and take me apart...
Oh, doesn't it just stab your heart!
Lovely, haunting, vexing.
2006-10-13


-Angela
it's absolutely beautiful hero...
2006-10-13



Once a hero, always a hero, hero!
2006-10-13


Rob Graber
And yet, with what style,
It doth softly beguile

--Was ever a wisp better celebrated?!
2006-10-13