goldfish.


~ In a way we're all like goldfish;

we start of innocent and unknowing
to later move on to 3 seconds of
hormonial insight
[where we see the world as it is]
but sadly those 3 seconds only last so long
and we carry on into the senile world of constriction ~



Poetry by kladdpapper
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Written on 2006-10-16 at 16:45

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Sandy Hiss
I enjoyed reading this. Simple but says so much.
2006-10-16


Zachary P. B.
i loved this... i'm like a fish out of water in a dry and deadly realism... so nightmarish i just want to wake up...

great use of italics here, let's ponder some more and change the world - please.

z
2006-10-16


Mathieu
Beautiful, honest words.
2006-10-16


summerbreeze
typ, skitsmart :*
2006-10-16