holding you

I held everything

Contribution to Ylvas different love poem challenge



There are blemishes  where your touch burned my skin

Heat rash  even on the inside of my mouth

Exhaling and inhaling  the sulfur of how your mind works



Days spent in each other   and in the coldest lakes

As two drowning people  making love under water

No frost known to man can stop you   from melting  me

Caressing my every iced vein  into magma

Earth revolves  as kingdom falls   when you pull me close





to  the silence   of ashes to ashes       dust to dust

Poetry by EmelÚn The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2006-10-19 at 19:01

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liz munro The PoetBay support member heart!
This line:
"As two drowning people making love under water"

WOW! I REALLY like this


superlative; a masterful poem by a masterful poetess!

Wow. This is beautiful! I would love to hear this read aloud, a duet... bookmarked...

an extrodinary slice of beauty and passion Em...as only you can do it!

lastromantichero The PoetBay support member heart!
woweeee young lady this is so warm and a beautifully sort of sensuality to it rgds mike