Zoya Zaidi
Drearest Liv, It is such a huge tribute, I am greatly humbled. May God Bless you my friend! But, you place is in my heart...
((((Hugs for making my day))))
Love, Zoya
2006-12-01

Saga
I can hear them, I can hear them all!!!!
2006-11-20

Alexander Dale Tørres
why do you wish for your heart to be torn to pieces??
that's wery painful and i know...but it was kinda beautiful at the same time sad....i liked it..thanks for sharing:D..*hugs*
2006-11-16

Natalie
Perfectly written :)
2006-11-15

Kathy Lockhart
oh Zoya, how have I missed you. For some reason you are not appearing on my page anymore. I had to find you again. So, I clicked on your name and saw you had written and I had missed.
This is so heart touching. I felt each piece of your heart. I heard each note. Love you, Kathy
2006-11-15

Amanda K
again am mistaken. i feel so sorry for that i wanted to give you 5 . i thought 1 means excellent.
2006-11-13

Amanda K
so sad but touchy. i think it can be a lyric.
2006-11-13

Lourdes
..... to live

where the arrow of your poem points

(splendid write in every way)
2006-11-12

Xuxa
A very interesting piece. Something not very common to be wanted! Good write! :)
2006-11-11

In these lines, in a simple and beautiful way, you present one of the great themes of poetry in all times and languages: the broken heart's longing, its beautiful song. Thanks!
2006-11-11

Zoya Zaidi
Come on Kaye! Relax! This breaking of heart is metaphorical. I am not heart broken at all. This, if you noticed, is inspired by Rumi's Persian couplet. Breaking of heart is talked about a lot in Urdu and Persian poetry...
((Hugs for the concern though, Kaye!))
Love, Zoya
2006-11-11

Arti
Beautiful write, and beautiful couplet... I've heard that before, I love Urdu poetry if I have someone to explain words to me!

This write is so totally you, so soft, so gently sad.. Quintessential Zoya!
2006-11-10

oddbird
beautifully sad....I love this, it's a clever poem, Cheryl x
2006-11-10

seda
very sweet

:D but Zoya is sweeter :D

love,
SEda
2006-11-10

wee2souls
Beautiful almost as though fitting your heart back together like a puzzle to fit just the right melody,what i got from this write
:)
hugs
cindy
2006-11-10

penfold18
heartache is such sweet sorrow, but I think I can go without it a while longer if I may.
2006-11-10

lastromantichero
hi there Zoya
a lovely poem
and so true
join the club lolololol
2006-11-10