*snickers*

(Nepenthes' Four Lines That Rhyme Challenge)



Abstain from Cocaine

Do tell me, dear shimmering crystal grain,
White and wet, carefully tickling my brain;
Have I in truth finally gone insane?
Talking to snowflakes is rather inane!



Poetry by Thomas Selnes The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2006-10-21 at 19:06

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Lourdes
.. but what a great conversation it may be !
2006-10-22


Kathy Lockhart The PoetBay support member heart!
Thomas this is a great addition. I almost wrote addiction. That would be insane!
2006-10-22



I liked this very much lourdes. But not that often!lol Just jesting, but you do point to the enhanced perception that I would imagine!lol cocaine would create in the mind! With drug, focus would be everything, but not for long, that is why they are drugs....

Nice write

Tai
2006-10-22


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Mind altering, totallly! a warning to all, Great write!
2006-10-21


Rob Graber
Gentle warning nicely packaged!
2006-10-21