Oceans of love

The ~~~~~ current ~~~~ surges ~~~~~~ these ~~~~~
~~ oceanic ~~~~~ of love ~~~~~ through ~~~~ veins ~

~ from ~~~~ unharnessed ~~~ the tides ~~~~~~ flow~
as ~~~ a dyke ~~~~~~~~ and as ~~~~~~ ebb and ~~~

channeled ~~~ the trenches ~~~~ depths ~~~ emotional
~~~~~~~ from ~~~~~~~~ of the ~~~~ of this ~~~~~~

~~~~~~ and the ~~ Benguela ~~~~ swirls, ~~~~ and ~~
reservoir ~~~~~ cold ~~~~~ current ~~~ upwells ~~~~

meets ~~~~~~ Norwegian ~~~~ I know ~~~~~~wave of
~~~ the warm ~~~~~~~~ waters ~~~~ this tidal ~~~~~

emotion ~~ found ~~~~~ resting ~~~~ at peace ~~~ you
~~~~~~ has ~~~ its final ~~~~ place, ~~~~~~ with ~~~










Poetry by Ananim
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Written on 2006-10-22 at 02:00

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I feel woosy after one Alu. The formating does it's title justice. I found one typo in 'has' final line, should be 'as'. I am really enjoying your work, please post more. Smiling, loving the romantic in you, Tai
2007-01-15


Emelén The PoetBay support member heart!
this is different. your style is unique and this poem is breath taking . It holds so much , sprinkled with secrets and yet , it tells all .
I take a bow sir . bookmrk.
2006-10-23


Lourdes
this ocean , lost in every beat , welcoming every wave . swimming between your words . collecting them , treasures . bury them deep . in the final place .
2006-10-22