Reality

On a walk along the misty shore
I bumped into this beautiful girl
On her wrist a magnificent bracelet she bore
I sensed my constitution unfurl

Reciprocate my love she did
my heart was hers to bleed
and underneath her dark eyelid
a universe on which to feed

Resplendent in everything she wore
monumental was her grace
If one thing I could adore
it was studying her face

Our future looks as good as set
in Spain we plan a home
Five kids is what we intend to get
so that we'll never be alone





(......and then one of us woke up)




Poetry by Ananim
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Written on 2006-11-05 at 02:07

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Ghost of Heino
someday someone will find that bracelet, maybe they will try it on and die
from heartache

That bracelet still bleeds
2008-11-16


Emelén The PoetBay support member heart!
the c - word ??
and who cares if you like spain or not lady
2007-05-19



You tease!rofl...I was scared to read this Alub. Totally sucked in, but the spanish say the C word too much in local chit chat for my liking so I would choose.........somewhere else. lol There was no exclamation mark after that reality so I will hang on to it if you don't mind. Sun seeker, Tai
2007-01-15


Emelén The PoetBay support member heart!
no

rate : excellently sad
2006-11-07


Lourdes
a beautiful write with a somewhat surprising end .
who in their right mind would want kids anyway . the world is full of these beautiful girls you know .

.. or is it ?
2006-11-07


Emelén The PoetBay support member heart!
a los perros , no? Que lastima .
2006-11-05