Leave me broken

My body lies broken.
My mind is a mess.
Please, don't touch me.
I'm not worthy of your caress.

Your fingertips make me sore.

Feelings repressed
make me depressed.

Your eyelids make me cry.
A solid cry of why.
Your shadow makes me weep.
A dark sleep, so deep.

Please, don't touch me.
I'm not worthy of your caress.
My body lies broken.
My mind is a mess.



Poetry by Daybreaker
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Written on 2005-09-30 at 23:41

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Surei
This is a very sad poem, but I like it very much! Sometimes we wish people would hurt us, just to feel alive...wonder why that is??? Thank you for sharing!
2005-10-18


John Ashleigh
If thats how you feel, then I feel it to. This makes me feel as if I know you, and I still dont know your name.
2005-10-01


Commentally Ill
ok (doesn't touch you) have it your way (leaves you broken)

:)
2005-10-01


Brenna
Ooohhh I really like this! This was bit on the short side I think but otherwise this was great! Flow, rhythm and all that stuff was there! I have really no complaints. I think this deserves a 5!
2005-10-01


Ray
very deep thoughts here...hmmm.
2005-10-01