Trying a (for me) new rhytm and a new rhymeschedule.


PRAYER FOR A SORROW SOUL


Oh my Lord, it's such a bore
and I don't want no more of this pain.

Oh my Lord, I'm getting old
but I'm trying to stay bold and sane.

Oh my Lord, I wish to leave,
could I receive the heavenly grace.

Oh my Lord, I'm completely lost,
do I have to get crossed to find my place?

Oh my Lord, have I reached the shore?
Is this the upper floor, so it seems?

Oh, my Lord, you heard my song.
Nothing can go wrong in my dreams.





Poetry by Daybreaker
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Written on 2006-10-28 at 01:00

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Kathy Lockhart
I really like the rhythm and rhyme scheme here. Well done. : )
2006-10-28