Dan you are one of my dearest and oldest friend on the bay...Your poems always stir me to the core; your sorrows grieve me even more...I wish you all the happiness today!


Daybreaker–Dan, my friend

My friend of sorrow, my friend of grief
A troubled soul, a tender leaf
Hanging on to the bough of life,
Life precarious, full of strife...

Deep inside your spirit needs
A friendship true, true love indeed.
But happiness eludes you all along
Your heart can never sing a song...

Traumas of past haunt you soul
Anguish torments you as a whole
Sorrow is your other name
Joy your way never came...

I wish all the joy for you,
Peace of mind and soul to you
Happy Birthday, Dan my friend
May your heart and soul soon mend...


Author: Zoya Zaidi
Aligarh (UP), India
Copyright ©: Zoya Zaidi




Poetry by Zoya Zaidi
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Written on 2006-11-01 at 17:50

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la tristesse
nice imagery in this one particularly the first verse
2006-11-07


Sabrina
Naaw, that is so kind of you Zoya!! :)
I see Dan was very moved.... ^^

Many hugs,
Sabrina
2006-11-06


Arti
Beautiful write zz... You manage to pull heartstrings all around, everytime.

Wonderful thought here... Happy birthday Dan!
2006-11-05


INDRAN REDDY
these words you have written...to read such tender lines...!!! the well of my emotions has been stirred again...and i feel the pain too
2006-11-04


Daybreaker
Oh my God!

How beautiful, my dearest friend Zoya!

I am moved beyond words! Beyond tears that start to water my eyes.

Thank you! Thank you! Thank you!
2006-11-02


maxmedo
Happy birthday from the east
Happy birthday from the west
Happy birthday from me
Happy birthday from the rest


Happy birthday Daybreaker


~MAX~
2006-11-01


lastromantichero The PoetBay support member heart!
a wonderful accolade from the lady herself rgds mike
2006-11-01


Bella_Laluna
A beautiful salut to a dear friend
BellaLaluna
2006-11-01


Kathy Lockhart
Another beautiful heart-felt poem Zoya for a wonderful, sweet poet.
2006-11-01