this is a fantasy poem based around the sensuality of orange subdued lighting


I saw you In Orange light by M.A.Meddings entry to Neps Norwegian wood challenge

I saw you in orange light   beautiful freckle face
and my heart was taken  by  your simple grace
a gentle smile  enchanting eyes to beguile
For that is all I see of you
And that is why  I  love you
Why isn’t it good  Norwegian wood


And the girl lying supine  in the bath
Well how I wished she had crossed my path
long ago  with her beautiful smile
And eyes that beguile
Hope she will wait  for just awhile
Why isn’t it good Norwegian wood

Then again in orange light  pretty freckles shine
And In the morning I did make her mine
With a gentlest of kisses
Much against her wishes
And that is why I loved her
Why wasn’t it good Norwegian wood





Poetry by lastromantichero The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2006-11-16 at 22:24

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Kathy Lockhart
Orange light, was it firelight? Were you burning the Norwegian wood? Lovely soft poem as is your romantic style.
2006-11-17


Phyllis J. Rhodes
We'll never know about Norwegian Wood
but it is for certain this is good!!!
2006-11-16


BlueyedSoul
A wonderfully beautiful write for the challenge Michael.

~Blue
2006-11-16