It was a pleasure to write this Sonnet with this very kind and warm hearted lady it was a pleasure as always. Nice to write together again  


The last Enchanted Time a Co write with Blue eyed soul and lastromantichero

This will be beautiful, a last enchanted time
I will ever fall in love quite as much as this
Then so helplessly find you will never be mine
It is likely that forever I will never feel your kiss
As in bittersweet, we find the way to this gentle place
Our worlds lost, yet found again within two beating hearts
Though we have never been so close or even face to face
We share this deep affection, through all the miles apart
For I was lost in a wilderness yet missed the dreams of you
And I searched for you in heartache pain a year long and gone
Until in helpless ecstasy I found my love was true
And hopelessly yet wondrously I saw you as the one
Sweet reverie upon my heart, I shall hold you near
For that loving caring heart  I hold so dear  





Poetry by lastromantichero The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2006-11-22 at 08:23

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Kathy Lockhart
Mike and Blue this is a beautiful sonnet. Your talents have emerged to create a poem of love and deep adoration. I felt my heart rhythm change as I read this. It is in my favorites.
2006-11-22



I was only saying to Dino about parallel lives Mike, this made me cry. Couldn't be much better than that, but I do have flu. Your romantic heart and this joint collaboration is a beauty beyond description. My hat off to you sir! I want your work on my site please. Smiling despite myself, Tai
2006-11-22



Pardon an ignorant girl again. But, Dino, where are all the predominant iambic pentameters? I'd be thankful if somebody explained them to me
2006-11-22



Sweet and gentle in content!
Though the irregular rhytm leaves me puzzled about this text's definition as a sonnet. Is there any expert out there who can explain?
2006-11-22