I think i have been reading too much of LastRomanticHero's poetry lol


As you smile


Every breath you take
a breath closer to my last
just like the flame that flickers
behind the glass
i know i have to burn
but oh! - Do i yearn
to stand still
for just a while
beneath the stars that sparkle
and dance across your eyes
to feel eternity unfold
as you smile.

© Rik - 28/11/2006



Poetry by Rik The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2006-11-29 at 11:22

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Zoya Zaidi
This is tenderly evocative, Rik.
Welcome back!
(((hugs)))
Love, Zoya
2006-12-09


F.i.in.e Moods The PoetBay support member heart!
a lucky woman i'd say :) this is tenderly romantic, pulsates beauty and absolute charm from your words... really leaves the heart with a warm smile... magnifique :) *hug* xx
2006-11-30


liz munro The PoetBay support member heart!
This is so beautiful -
I usually try to advoid romantic poetry -
I tend to find it a bit soppy -
but this was sutle in it's approach,
big in meaning and drew me in like
the moth to the flame.

Love your work Rik.

liz
2006-11-30


BlueyedSoul
well reading lastromantichero's poetry is making us all
weak-in-knee romantics.....i say its a good thing! You seem to be biten by this bug of sorts too Rik....very nice work.

*smiles*
~Blue
2006-11-29


Saga
It's good to hear from you again, this is excellent sir, just excellent!!!
2006-11-29



Romantic contents, of course. But expressed in a way that is very much yours!
2006-11-29


lastromantichero The PoetBay support member heart!
this is a beautiful poem you old romantic you

and i think you have the turn of phrase to win all the ladies heart
well done rik

from a faded romantic lolololol
2006-11-29