We were asked to write a short story...red was one of the topics..I tried writing on 'keyhole' then I tried 'pimple'...dint work...so I started on 'red' and wound up with this instead of a story...My friends loved it...and persuaded me to submit it


I'm in the sun at dusk
I'm a happy heart
I'm a little girls dress
Or a strawberry jam tart.

I'm a wound on your skin
Or a painful pimple
I'm a blush on a bride
With a cheerful dimple.

I'm in the rainbow
And the US flag
I'm a superhero's cape
Or a Forum Plastic bag.

You can see me in a teachers tick mark
Or in a furnace,A fiery spark.
Cherries on top of ice cream
Or a lover's kiss in a day dream.

I'm everywhere
Lipgloss, shorts, a lacy bra
An angry man's eyes,
Or your favourite flower.

The most vibrant colour
The most striking shade
God thought of love
When I was made.

Poetry by Parnika
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Written on 2006-12-03 at 08:57

Tags Red  Colour  Love 

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yessss, red, most of all:)). good poem!!!

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colourfull indeed !!!! a good write
rgrds : zee

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