Forgive me

You are silent
It always makes me a bit sad
Especially when before that
I had written something what
I regret
When I'm too emotional
To you sometimes,
When I have my black thoughts
or doubts,
And I have put them all to you
Then this silence,
Then I feel
Such an emptiness
Such a idle day,
You blend into me as a tree
I'm not sure how I could live
Without you
I don't want even to imagine this
You are within me
And it's enough to live
And to feel
Everything
What is possible
And to love you still
Forever and ever I will
And forgive me
Every doubt
I have had so far
Every bad word
Every thought
Which is against
Our love,
You and me,
Which is because
I feel so weak
Sometimes
Without your arms
Around me




Poetry by anna3
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Written on 2005-10-14 at 15:31

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Esti D-G The PoetBay support member heart!
What a beautiful poem. I had a row with my partner this morning so your poem is very appropriate and I too feel that I need to be forgiven "Every bad word, every thought".
Well done,
luv esti
2005-10-28


Ray
Love sometimes can feel like a merry-go-round. But you have the right to feel how you feel and express it to show your loved one who you really are. This to me is the true love that is so much absent in many relationship. Keep up the good work and thanks for sharing your feelings.
2005-10-14


Zoya Zaidi
Yes! silence can be killing sometimes. It is always healthy to have a good fight and get it out of your system...These silent types usually bear the grudge for a long time. But on the other hand if you are not guilty, I don't think you should say sorry so easily,just because the other person is trying to punish you with his silence for something which might not be your fault at all. Saying sorry kind of weakens your case. Am I making sense? Great piece any way!!
2005-10-14


penfold18
We all say things we regret and it takes courage to ask forgiveness, lets hope you don't have to wait to long.
2005-10-14


chasingtheday The PoetBay support member heart!
it's always make me.... - it always makes me

even imagine this - even to imgaine this

just those two points i noticed anna :)

aye, sometimes we speak and we regret as soon as the words have left our mouth. i hope you are forgiven quickly.
2005-10-14