There's a Stranger Passing By


There's a stranger passing by.
He doesn't know how hard you try.
Your world is slowly falling apart.
There's no mercy for the weak of heart.

He strokes you gently by the cheek.
His eyes are fierce, his face is bleak.
"Heavens, you have certainly gone astray!
Come with me - I'll lead your way!"

I look into his eyes, those savages strange.
This world is not in order, this world is still deranged.
"But there's so much beauty I long to see!"
I raise my voice, I flee from thee.

But you're caught in the web, have no place to go.
No point in resisting now that you know.
Your time is up, it's time to die
when there's a stranger passing by!





Poetry by Daybreaker
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Written on 2006-12-09 at 00:16

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This one sent a shiver resounding up and down my spine. This is amazing. Again this is going to be bookmarked. I love you poetry, it has marevelous moods, lovely language, excellent emotion, miraculous meaning. I love it.

~Kiva

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Christian Lanciai The PoetBay support member heart!
Gruesome! Thrilling! Wonderful! Compliments!

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Zoya Zaidi
Don't look at the srtranger my friend,
He will lead you stray and you
Won't be able to defend
Your right to live and be gay,
Just ignore him my friend
And go your way...
Do not lok back, Pray!

(((Hugs, my dear friend!)))
Love, Zoya

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Kathy Lockhart
that stranger comes to us all. This is chillingly haunting. The flow, the rhyme scheme all come together to create a very well written poem.
2006-12-09