'Each person creates their own prison each their own hell on earth'

I wrote this poem many years ago about my own particular hell then  




Hell by M.A.Meddings entry to The Hell challenge

Hell
Surely it must be like this 
No fire
No brimstone
Just the heartache
Only the stomach
Churning
The realisation
Of you
Not loving me
Anymore

 





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Written on 2006-12-13 at 08:40

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wee2souls
A HELL! of a write my friend:)
hugs to you
cindymac
2006-12-13



I can only agree with you, hero!
"Hell" is of course not a place beyond death. It is a state of mind, characterized by the realization (or the feeling) of not being loved.
2006-12-13


Amanda K
oh, that's the hell of lovers indeed. i would appreciate if you don book me there. a cute piece :D
2006-12-13



Ouch, yes I agree. Great response to a place called Hell. I was in it last night. 13 hours none stop pain with a nerve in a tooth. Never cried so much over on tooth in my life, but still have it!lol Silly me. Silly you for thinking you are not loved, we all love you, so she would have to share anyway!

Smiling in pain

Tai
2006-12-13


Kathy Lockhart The PoetBay support member heart!
I've felt that Hell for sure. Thank God I got over it. : )
2006-12-13


Christian Lanciai The PoetBay support member heart!
Excellent!
2006-12-13