I'm Guided By Darkness - I'm Guided By Light!


I'm guided by darkness.
I'm guided by light.
The rays of my energy have gone out of sight.

A pale moon of longing is trying to scream.
The darkness has won, it wasn't a dream.
I protect my only candle, the light of my last hope.
To keep the fire burning, to master it, to cope.

Flickering candle, it flickers no more.
I'm lost in this darkness, I can't find the door.
But wait, I see, a flickering light to be.
A radiant sun of strength shining just for me.

I'm guided by darkness.
I'm guided by light.
The rays of my energy are blinding my sight.



Poetry by Daybreaker
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Written on 2006-12-14 at 02:27

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Arti
Daniel, this is such a strong, beautiful piece of poetry. I haven't been around much to comment on your work... Sorry about that.
Thanks for sharing this. I needed it tonight.

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night soul woman The PoetBay support member heart!
I love the rythm, the flow of this piece of art!What a great poem!Well written!*applause*

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2006-12-14


Kathy Lockhart
great rhythm and rhyme scheme throughout. Plus I love the dichotomy of the poem.
2006-12-14