I erased your name

from my wish-list which I gave to santa claus
I did it because I was afraid off..
that you could be hurt when he put
you in the sack with all the toys..

Poetry by Miro
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Written on 2006-12-17 at 23:40

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This is so sweet that Santa will special delivery her to you I am sure. I think you could take the 'of' off the end of line 2 and 'afraid' only has one 'f'. You are getting there though, I love your little gems and so will Santa! Tai