This poem is mildly explicit but it attempts to show the beauty of love


Silk Soft Surrender by M.A.Meddings

Silk soft 
surrender
Eroticly through
What gentle agony
This thing that we do

Warm your smooth
Welcome
For the glory of me
Two helpless lovers
Naked in need

In awe of each other 
Poised
And yet longing
Eye contact fear
Seeing no wrong in

The beauty
The  passion
Helpless and free
Riding on down
To our ecstacy

Deeply
Within you
Your soft gentle sighs
Hard rippled Torso
Embraced by your thighs

My entry
complete
Rythmic we  move 
just giving all
For the sake of our love

Edges of Ecstacy
Soon
To draw nigh 
Please darling dont leave me 
Your soft gentle cry

The scented
Explosion
This final act
Impertinent nipples 
Our bodies racked 

Muscles so taught
Just rigid
They win
The ominous beautiful
Aching within

We collapse
In a heap 
Your Soft Belly bobbing
Then I cherish your sacrifice
And soothe all your sobbing

Love is beautiful

 

 

 

 

   

 





Poetry by lastromantichero The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2006-12-19 at 13:06

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R.K.Singh
Yes, Mike: Love is indeed beautiful. And, the involving passion, which you call HELPLESS AND FREE, is a great imagery. I read the poem several times, feeling each word, deep within.
R K
2006-12-22


Coolaaron88
Wonderful Mike. love is beautiful and you showed us how wonderful it really is. Good Job

~Aaron Rowe
2006-12-22


BlueyedSoul
YES....YES....YES....OMG YESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS

mmmmmmm oh yes!
*smiles*
nice, very nice indeed!
blue xox

he he he ...loved it babes lol
2006-12-20



For being a sacrifice, it sounds very, very pleasant, hero!
Gentle and hot!
2006-12-19


Kathy Lockhart
WoW!!! catching my breath. Truly a beautiful, softly described union of lovers.
2006-12-19


The Nxt LeveL
Definately worth reading

I think you have acurately captured the moment in all it's heated glory
2006-12-19



hot. definitely VERY hot. anybody in for a cold shower?:D
2006-12-19