Haiku 4

White-clad warriors
Patrol castles in the mind,
Watch enemy within.

Chris Fernie, 2008

Poetry by Chris Fernie
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Written on 2007-01-05 at 20:30

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Kathy Lockhart
the screw top is so much more convenient. I have a heck of a time getting that cork back in! This is a poem that plays. Its fun!

Zesty, Quirky, and fun--love the imagery! What a refreshing read.

Vicky -- Hungary
Somehow reminds me on James Joyce... :-) Like it... :-)

Rob Graber
You called it: cute & neat, Chris!

Sandy Hiss
Adorable, zany poem you've written here Chris. Here's to no bad wine!

josephus The PoetBay support member heart!
Good write (Chuckle Chuckle)! I'm a wine nut myself and its taken a bit to convince me that screw tops are better;-)

I can't think of a better way to end the day than with a great bottle of a rare vintage with good conversation and great friends.

Thanks for the chuckle and for the good write