Promising Daybreaks


Each new day I awake
with a sense of longing a piece.
I await the daybreak
when my loneliness will cease.

Foolish longing and senseless tears.
Can a heart really save another?
Forthcoming losses and scornful fears.
If you can save me? Don't bother!

My personality is haunted.
Wicked grudges groan.
My soulmate is wanted.
Identity unknown.

Promising daybreaks are liars.
But they cannot fool me!
I'm burning with eternal fires.
This feeling of missing thee.





Poetry by Daybreaker
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Written on 2007-01-09 at 00:53

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Arti
"My personality is haunted.
Wicked grudges groan.
My soulmate is wanted.
Identity unknown."

excellent verse... I hope that identity becomes a known one soon. The peace-filled daybreak is not faraway.

Language: 5
Format: 5
Mood: 4
Overall: 4
2007-01-09


Teala
Keep up the hope! Excellent piece of yearning..bravo!
2007-01-09