Can I even write an axeptable little poem? I doubt it, but here is my attempt.


Making my heart a mess
When you're lying in this place
Colliding with my face

Now my hands are longing for your back
Your fingers 'round my shoulders lack
In my inner crystal ball
I see you are about to fall

From me

Poetry by Tiffany
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Written on 2007-01-13 at 19:40

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Wow - here you are even using rhymes. Amazing..

Zoya Zaidi
Dear Tiffany, this is absolutely original thought and approach to the central idea of the poem.
Well done.
Certainly superb for the first attempt!
Keep writing!
Welcome to the Bay!
Love, Zoya