Zainab
Very nice
Thats an amazing love

"I will keep you to my heart forever
In this life we both might lead
And treasure you for ever sweetheart
Then satisfy your every need "

I loved these lines
Really deeply
2007-01-18

BlueyedSoul
authentic romantichero material i'd say. exquisitite.
~Blue
2007-01-18

betsy Firefly
vintage - yes. I wonder if they bit over more than they could chew back then?
2007-01-17

wonderbread
i would disagree with 'vintage', surely generic was correctly offered, accepted. hmm...while the last line was preferred, does it correctly fit, hero? i quite enjoyed the lines of this piece, certainly well written. except, for the ending...the weak point of poetry, wouldnt you agree? always the end...loose, left untied, unreasoned, un...finished? hmm...i suppose the subject isnt necessarily one needing closure...perhaps it is left 'generic' and ill-precious purposefully...tis your style hero, i must say...
2007-01-17

Arti
Satin sheets and a romantic lover like you is all I need... Seriously, even though dreams like these still hurt.
2007-01-16

Phyllis J. Rhodes
This reminds me of an old standard ballad that might have been sung by Bing Crosby in his time that had been passed on from the generation before him to his generation and will continue on being recorded over and over because of it's simple yet beautiful lyrics and message.
2007-01-16

anna3
Oh such sweet write you did again that I can't stop dreaming about the man like you it is so warm so inviting so wonderful
2007-01-16

Kathy Lockhart
I love satin sheets. I love this poem. xxxxx
2007-01-16

A loving write Mike, I would take out 'then' in the last line and put either I will or just, satisfy. But that is moi! Great love poem. Smiling at you, Tai
2007-01-16

kath
I agree with Dino ... a typicall and beautiful Michael Meddings poem and I belive Cyrano is up for hard competition .... and luckily for him he can't take up the fight ....

rgds kath
2007-01-16

dear michael, you have outrun all possible imagination...i cannot possibly think of a woman who would not fall for you after reading something like this...
Lilly xxx
2007-01-16