We all have dreams inside of us, as fear and longing at the prospect of them. I´ve tried to embody this instant moment of await, wich devides us into two different forces - Hope and resignation.(The poem is also set to music)Please "decrease" the text:

The await

Mountains trembles in the distance
Proudly dances with their clumsy chests
Charmingly entices with their
Pitch black cavities as eyes

Beyond the thickest of fogs
Beyond the farthest of lands
Behind an anxious veil, hanging
From the sky like a great wall
A veil with good intentions, separating
Dreams from reality

The sunlight places its children feet around me
Like a curious stream, searching for every nook
Awaiting the emerge of an inner voice

Poetry by Almaz
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Written on 2007-01-22 at 18:03

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Amanda K
you succeeded in delivering the theme here. wishing you all the best from my side.

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nice poem.

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Zoya Zaidi
Very delicate imagery.... Artfully done dear Diamond on the bay!
Locve, Zoya

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