A Seashore Tanka


Waves and the Shore (Tanka)

Waves ardently kiss
the beach; the shore wallows in
the caress; Silently
merges with the deep Seabed
Drowns into the Ocean depth...



Author: Zoya Zaidi
Aligarh (UP), India
Copyright ©: Zoya Zaidi

Photo: " Seagulls on the Casey Beach- Australia" by and ©: Zoya Zaidi





Poetry by Zoya Zaidi
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Written on 2007-02-20 at 20:32

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F.i.in.e Moods The PoetBay support member heart!
i have a terrible memory when it comes to these forms... how is the tanka constructed again? :) i felt as though i was in this seashore snapshot... really nice and peaceful :) *hugs* xx
2007-05-11


Individuality
a good piece, personally i prefer the longer choka form, but tanka is still good.
2007-02-22


kid
A short way to describe a sea shore. Nice poem i respect it
2007-02-21


night soul woman The PoetBay support member heart!
I love the ocean!You just described the reason why I love the ocean!Thank you for this one Dear Zoya!
2007-02-21