its jus this feeling you know...that I get sometimes....it makes me feel like its a prelude to something but i don't know what...i've described it as best as i can....are u familiar wit it? My current interpretation is 'dread'..but then I could feel d


This Feeling

The Feeling I'm feeling
is quite exhausting
It comes and goes
impossible to evade
keeps me in its throes
then slowly fades.
It lingers, suspended
as though it is loth to leave
it clings on in me,
till it couldn't possibly
anymore.
Tis only a moment
of rest that i get,
till me and the feeling
have, yet again, met.
It travels through my throat
makes me swallow
It gives me goosebumps
on the back of my neck.
Makes my ears tingle
till it spreads to my toes
then everywhere else,
it could possible go.
It isn't painful
It doesn't hurt
I only wish it would
leave me alone.



Poetry by shar
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Written on 2007-02-20 at 14:07

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Mark J. Wood
Surf it.
2007-02-22


Parnika
U've personified a feeling!
Good job!
aND NO..i DON'T THINK IT'S DREAD...when i feel like that I usually interpret it as excitement...it could be anyhting really...almost any intense feeling can be described with this poem....
2007-02-20


V.V.Ramesh
well written and well expressed:)

Rate :5
2007-02-20