seda
short but lovely !
2007-03-17

Amanda K
i love your poems and wish if they were longer
2007-03-17

F.i.in.e Moods
from my understanding of your words i'd say it's about love, and love is a rush, so i can't see it slowing down some ;) nice description of what it's like to be living with 'their' love... sound a special heart... thanks for sharing :f xx
2007-03-16

Kiran
Wonderfully written with a wealth of meaning int it. Fantastic, I loved this! :-)
2007-03-14

Karen Canning
love takes our breath away you say it all in your poem

huggs
karenxx
2007-03-14

angelwings
simple truths with intense depth/angelwings
2007-03-14

Peter Humphreys
This is beautiful and the last line just adds that question, that edge that makes the reader think. I really like it.
2007-03-14

Janine>K
very nice Salem
thank you for sharing this piece
2007-03-13

nature
its beuatifull thank you
2007-03-13