Edible Flowers


I love how he writes
of poetry and language.
He makes verbs smile as
they dance with nouns
and wink at adjectives.

His moons sigh and
rays of light quiver.
His sheets are bashful
on the bed where he
describes lovemaking ~

lovemaking like it
has never been
seen before,
a new sensual,

where flowers
get naked,
shedding their petals,
awaiting, ~
almost wilting
for their next
stanza.






Poetry by ardent.March
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Written on 2007-03-19 at 18:55

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i honestly do not have any one line i favor the most in this - all of the imagery tickles my thoughts softly and pleasantly... a very expressive poem of desire and passion is what comes to me... and of course, it's simply beautiful :) *hugs* xx
2007-04-23



Beautiful imagery and the title is perfectly suggestive of erotica, of the most gentle form. Loved it, welcome to the bay, Tai
2007-03-19


Lavender
Ah... sweet wonder of love as language flows, and we know where to find lovely language all configured. I am so glad you are here to share your radiant talent with us! This poem is grand!
2007-03-19


Individuality
ah adjectives lol so many have said to me i use too many in my poetry, but i say i am a poet and language is mine to use as i see fit :) sorry, every time i see the word it makes me think of all the mad comments people have left me on the topic.

ah a sensual approach here i think, tender words exploring love, soft and gentle smiles and blushes in words colouring the meanings with pleasure, fragance too, lifting the sheets so hearts and minds may enter.
2007-03-19