Time Yields Us

Allow for time to seal us in slumber
Consent her to drowse in deep rocking seas
This would not curse or ever encumber
She would repay us accordingly, please,

Give fresh flowers' aromas to settle
Allow for time to seal us in slumber
So she could not fade one perfect petal
This would not curse or ever encumber

Let her down softly in idle fields
Consent her to drowse in deep rocking seas
Then we could see what of us she yields
She would repay us accordingly, please?



Poetry by ardent.March
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Written on 2007-03-20 at 10:44

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F.i.in.e Moods The PoetBay support member heart!
this made me think, respect time, cajole it and enjoy it, and she will do the same in return... yeah, my mind :) beautiful words here... i'd like to try this form... would you let me know how to construct one? :) :f xx
2007-04-06


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the renrhyme :) now i see what you were asking me earlier with yields and fields. the first line of final verse i am counting 9. a good piece, a soft gentle atmosphere here.
2007-03-20