Cages Of Air


The rain escapes;
it lightly dashes ~
never looking back!

Pouring sweat
from fast footsteps,
maybe it has
disappeared for good
but it can be found
hiding within the
darkest of shades.

I smile as I capture it!
It falls down against the
shadowed background of trees.

"Aha, I see you,
now I've got you trapped!"

Just a quick catch and release ~
It cannot stay grasped in
the cell of my sight for too long.



Poetry by ardent.March
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Written on 2007-03-24 at 08:56

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F.i.in.e Moods The PoetBay support member heart!
this is so good... i get the image of a character going about chasing something, a thing very much desired, but for some reason, even though reached, it never sticks around long enough to be more... so the chase continues on... or something to that effect :) love your poetry... this one with the dialogue gives a different life to the words, i find... leaves many images in mind for me... truly wonderful, thanks :) :f xx
2007-04-06


Individuality
this makes me think of dancing on air, chasing the dream of love and enjoying the sport :)
2007-03-24