Ivy

Ivy ambles up trees,
Instilling beauty's face --
Infusions in the shade,
Idle breezes brush cheeks,
Ideal visions -- violet
Illuminates like rays,
Island paths to the soul.



Poetry by ardent.March
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Written on 2007-03-28 at 07:48

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Lavender
So fine!!! Aye, I see the form and enjoy reading and writing these! A happy choice for writing nature poems, especially!
2007-04-02


Kiran
Oh this is so beautifully written. Love the form, a pielade I think! I dont think I've spelt this right!!! :-) Lovely imagery. Just wonderful.
2007-03-29


Rob Graber
Ivy "ambling": a great image; love it!
2007-03-28


F.i.in.e Moods The PoetBay support member heart!
this is really neat... first thing that caught me when i was done reading is how the fact the poem's lines all start with the letter I, gave the effect of a climbing vine, really... something about the vine that just emanates freedom for me when i look and contemplate on them during the summer... they are beautiful... your text captured that feeling for me... :) *hugs* xx
2007-03-28


yoonoos peerbocus
ivy climbing up and soul analogy is out standing. well done.
2007-03-28


Individuality
i love ivy, i am a big plant lover and love the effect ivy has on houses. a fast vine, covering the space it finds, the soul :)
2007-03-28