Less of me, more of you!


Humility in thin air

You are the rainbow
that shines through me
if I stay colorless



Poetry by betsy Firefly
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Written on 2007-04-07 at 19:07

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M Heathcote
Beautiful visionary words
That stands like a solid structure
Of hope and promise!
2007-05-16


Pamela A Lamppa
Excellent piece.
Absolutely excellent!
2007-04-15


Amanda K
so lovely
2007-04-14


F.i.in.e Moods The PoetBay support member heart!
love this all around... so expressive and so complete in meaning in a few lines... the message, so true... staying colorless permits others' colors to come through without any shadows or veils overlaying them... often brightens our own if we stay opened to others... well, that's what I'm interpreting :) a very nice text :)*hugs* xx
2007-04-14


Hagzissa
Wow.... amazing how so few words can say so much! Beautiful and will be bookmarked!
2007-04-10


Zoya Zaidi
I just love the last line!
((Hugs dear Betsy!)))
Love, Zoya
2007-04-07



A great sentiment in this little haiku betsy, much humility and power to your pen. Less is more indeed! smiling at you, Tai
2007-04-07


Rob Graber
What a beautifully expressed sentiment! At least the air is more pervasive and enduring than the rainbow for which it ostensibly abnegates itself... ;-,?
2007-04-07