What is love?

WHAT IS LOVE?
When a touch can bring your being alive,
When waking up to see his face makes you smile,
When you want to share every feeling that comes to mind,
Be it good or bad ,you can say what you want and you know he wont be unkind.
When time together can be so full of wonderment ,
Sometimes laughter,sometimes tears,sometimes arguments.
When the thought of him thinking of another,
Is enough to make your ming full of bother,
When moments together can be quiet or on the go,
Yet never feeling the need to put up a show.
When you can be with him,what you are when you are alone,
That is when you can say your heart has found its HOME.......



Poetry by radhika
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Written on 2005-11-14 at 14:29

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John Ashleigh
Good use of rhyme, and good use of describing the thoughts of jealousy and angst for love. - Perhaps you could structure your poem a little better, it deceives the eye of prose.

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2005-11-14


penfold18
All things to all men (and women of course) providing it is unconditional on both sides its the most beautiful emotion in the world, a nice piece.
2005-11-14