A Sparkling Song

Soft music rings
in my ears.
Miniature golden

Symbols of our
life, chimed together.

Love dangles here
with emotion
and sentimental

It sings in unison
with these earrings,
pierced within the
lobes of my heart
and soul.

This love is a soft
sparkling song from you.
I hear it every time
I wear them.

Poetry by ardent.March
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Written on 2007-04-09 at 10:32

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Brilliant write, lovely imagery and word choice. Loved this! :-)

M Heathcote
Beautiful write

pierced within the
lobes of my heart
and soul.

Just wonderfully felt...

Rob Graber
Romantic and witty, especially stanza 4... great write!

a good personal piece of poetry jingling here, it is nice how such little things can represent a lot in life, we live in a world where people go for large expensive symbols of their alleged success, yet a gift given in the name of love can outshine such and play music to the heart and soul.

yoonoos peerbocus
the imagery is striking