rhyming haiku! who knew?




Heat

nature sparks the flame
burning hot, wild, and untamed
passion is thy name

kathy lockhart
4/19/07





Haiku by Kathy Lockhart
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Written on 2007-04-20 at 02:12

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Saga
Absolutely darling!!!
2007-04-21


kid
yah that is it the red colour i mean.
nice poem it is heaty
2007-04-20


Dan Cederholm
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What a wonderful haiku Kathy

All the best and warm wishes

to you, Dan

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2007-04-20


amandeep
yes, correct.
2007-04-20


Elle The PoetBay support member heart!
definitely a sensual hot haiku lol - and why not rhyme, when its written as well as this is.

Elle x
2007-04-20


lastromantichero The PoetBay support member heart!
In fact it is very hot and so gentle in many ways a building of the fire results from these words hugs for you xxxxylkMichael
2007-04-20


lastromantichero The PoetBay support member heart!
Hi there Katherine this is a beautiful description of Passion and so lovely
2007-04-20


Rob Graber
rhyming haiku? why not? Cool, Kathy!
2007-04-20



short and sweet and kinda neat,, you nailed passion on the head , well wrote Kathy
2007-04-20


TheLine
Yeah i can feel the heat in this one. The mid-section is the best.

You write great.
Poet is thy name. :D
2007-04-20