i wasn't in the best of moods when i wrote this....please comment and tell me what you think!


The 'perfect' anything
is a nasty myth
the perfect lover,
the perfect mother
the perfect day
the perfect way.
there's nothing there
just words and air.
When a book in a thimble
is blessed with 'its perfect'
one can only imagine
what wine of God tis filled with.
It's not perfect...
there's no such thing
there's just beautiful
and inspiring
take what you want
and disregard the rest
the truth is
nothing is perfect

Poetry by shar
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Written on 2007-05-22 at 12:52

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Hmmm... Well I have to say I am in ways a perfectionist... But I don't think everything is perfect. Yeah, a perfect cirlcle or perfect grade... But I don't really think you can find a perfect person or like you said a perfect day... I think we can only be our best. But on the other hand what does perfect mean? I have to kinda agree with penfold18 I guess it really depends on a persons idea of what you believe perfect is...
I really liked this poem. Its great!

I believe perfection is in the eye of the beholder, everyone has different opinions and tastes, what a boring world it would be if every one liked the same things, other then that , I liked the write.