When a star . . .

 

Tonight, a star
has fallen in my arms
I take it closer
to my heart
and then what?

- If not the dance
 the dance of a star?

Dancing with a star in my arms

leaving
my sorrows behind

leaving
trails of love
trails of betrayal
trails of feelings
that have never seen
the light of the day
the blossoming spring
the waterspout
the kiss of the peace


and with the star in my arms
I take two steps forward
and one step back
 
glittering star
glistening eyes
and a smile

- What will this night bring?
  Where will I hide this star?

- If not in my heart?
   Before the sun goes up
   I will make a secret wish
   and let the star fall in my heart

Starlight shine bright
show me the way
help me reach the sky
before I fall again
in someone's arms
like you did tonight . . .

 

 

 





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Written on 2007-05-30 at 20:56

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Rob Graber
Very pretty poem, Carmen!
2007-06-03


nature
as usual your writing is nothinig short of perfection
lovely girl rock on
2007-06-01


Saga
Sweet love from sweet innocense coming from something so sweet and dreamy as a star.
2007-06-01


V.V.Ramesh
falling star , really a very good poem my dear friend:)
really good one
Rate:)5
2007-05-31


lastromantichero The PoetBay support member heart!
wow Carmen a beautiful love poem for him rgds mike
2007-05-30


J. E.
Very nice poem! I like especially the ending.
2007-05-30


Dan Cederholm
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Pretiest star (David Bowie) mmm!
and we se them faling from the sky
Excuse me when I kiss the sky. . .
wise words of Jimi Hendrix!

Sometimes when you fall in some-
ones arms you can feel that you
reach the sky and the castels is not
made of sand everytime. . .

I love this one, BRAVO!!!

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2007-05-30