What will be,Will Be.

Come hither, come thither

Come show me the way

Show me my fortune

And what shall I pay

Should it be wealth

Or health I should seek

Shall I wallow in glory

Or stand by the meek

What is it thats written

In the heavens above

Shall I fall to misfortune

Or be enraptured in love

Though why should I stress out

I'll go with the flow

What will be, will be

And I'd rather not know.





Poetry by penfold18
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Written on 2007-06-04 at 09:51

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Esti D-G
And I'd rather not know. .. perfect ending to a perfect, jaunty poem,

luv esti
2007-06-06


nature
very thought provoking and well written as usual
not very surprised coming from you
loved it
2007-06-06


weirdzarun
This piece is a straightforward master of words. You act as though you have a choice in what goals you want out of life, and try to scratch the surface of plotting out each, but fail, or recoil, and let your destiny's path form all on it's own. You speak so much thought in so few words. Brilliant. And most definitely bookmarked.
2007-06-05


Kathy Lockhart
such a lovely flowing poem with a whimsical feel.
2007-06-04


Rob Graber
Neat poem, Graham! Lines 5-8 I find especially fine.
2007-06-04


lastromantichero The PoetBay support member heart!
profound wisdom in a lyrical rolling text of skillful execution well done Graham

rgds Mike
2007-06-04