A love poem to express how my love developed and embraced her


Take my Breath Away by M.A.Meddings

The right way is the way you came to me 
And I to you a barely perceptable feeling 
That grew and grew 
A thrill when i saw you name 
A heartache that you never came yesterday
When i hoped you would 
And the way I felt so good when you read my text 
The intensive thoughts of what next can I do to win her 
And those silent times I looked for you 
The wondering ache of what would I do if you left me now
The hastily made private messages held your  nane 
Loves sweet game thats all I tried to do 
Is to  let you know in a stupid sulky way 
That your presence in my life is so beautiful 
Seeking a way to say as I fell to my knees 
I am lonely please love me again
Take my breath away



Poetry by lastromantichero The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2007-06-08 at 21:03

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M Heathcote
Hi nice write Mike

And I think it might inspire
one from me,

Keep the penned romances
of your heart a flowing
"lastromantichero"
2007-06-10


Rob Graber
Really, really nice write!
2007-06-09


Phyllis J. Rhodes
This is truly a knight's love letter to his queen. This is his heart handed to her on a silken pillow to do with as she pleases. This is love, vulnerable and open, willing for all of life to be built upon it. Beautiful.
2007-06-09


Kathy Lockhart
oh how beautiful are your sweet words of love to me. I am in awe of you. You started by making me sigh with your poetry when i first came to this site and now you take MY breath away
with the purity, the honesty, the all encompassing power of your love. I love you. xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxyb
2007-06-08


seda
Amazing work :) Very well expressed .Kathy will like the poem so much

love,
Seda
2007-06-08



this poem truly is a breath-taking one...i'm in total awe here...and i'm sure Kathy will appreciate it so much! splendid description, Michael!!!!
Lilly xxx
2007-06-08