I love the flow and the simplicity...so meaningful you have shown here!!!great piece hero!!!!kissess
2007-06-29

TeeTee
awwwwww melt my heart and steal my soul is how your words come to me great write I have much admiration to you and Kathy on how you both remind me of how my husband Will is my inspiration to write this way you do have a way to catch a soul and warm a heart.Kathy sazid you was a great writer and I must admitt she is on point I was able to feel what you was saying through your words.keep flowing greatly enjoyed reading your works.great writers you and Kathy you both know how to get a person to feel it through your words as well as my husband Will does to.nice to meet such talent and love in words here.
2007-06-28

Hagzissa
Almost like you've read my mind cause that's exactly how I feel for my future husband, besides from that queen-part that is... :)

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Beautiful writing and I can very well relate to this one. *applauds*
2007-06-27

Of course she is, hero!
2007-06-27

Coolaaron88
Its amazign when you realize that some people in your life are that special. To find a queen with morals that you can be proud of is a special kind. You have written about a rare women that only time can produce. Very well written text from a well taught gentlemen.

~Aaron Rowe
2007-06-27

she
This poem has brought me down to my knees......it is so sweet, so beautiful!!!!! I hope you sent it to her too. No ready in her right mind wont love you like crazy after reading this. An excellent write! Bravo! Bravo!
2007-06-27

Elle
It must be love :) Beautiful poem Mike

Elle x
2007-06-27

oooh I hear doves cooing Mike!lol Wonderful romantic you as usual. She truly is, a lucky lady. Grinning at you, Tai
2007-06-27

Kathy Lockhart
you my darling knight have made my dreams come true. Your sweet, tender words of love bring me so much happiness. I am truly blessed by our love. xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxyb
2007-06-27