© Broken Foot '07


Wander



Go to the hill

of my cheek

near my eye


Don't stay among

the sprouting trees

of my neck


But whisper

in the cave

of my ear


That you love me.




Poetry by Broken Foot
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Written on 2007-07-10 at 00:19

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Zoya Zaidi
Dear Eric, I love every word of the poem and the whole lanscape of your face!
Nice to have you back friend!
(((Hugs)))
Love, Zoya
2007-07-12



Intense, playful, tender, humorous: A delightful text!
It's good to see you're back!
2007-07-11


kid
cool poem there is an atmosphere of love in it short and beautiful
2007-07-11


lastromantichero The PoetBay support member heart!
cool work Mr broken foot and its good to sxee you writing here again
rgds mike
2007-07-10


Janine>K
Brilliant!, at first you left the reader with a little bit of mystery and then gently you ease the readers curiosity to advise off your deepest desire. This was excellently done.. absolutely loved it
2007-07-10


M Heathcote
Hi Broken foot

Yes I too I like this one!
2007-07-10


M Heathcote
Hi Broken foot

Yes I too Ilike this one!
2007-07-10


Elle
This is good - it does feel like a sensuous map. I enjoyed reading, thanx

Elle x
2007-07-10