exams...3 more...and then the holidays start...stressed...


labyrinth


running running running
running through a maze
does it go left!?
or straight ahead?
i look up but i can not see
the sky is blue
peaceful
the walls are moving in
narrowing, choking
causing anxiety
it's pushing me down
i hit the ground
my breath is heavy
sweat on the brow of my forehead
it's pushing me down
a mazeĀ 
sufficating me
out
no way out
the sky is blue
peaceful
there a gate
run!





Poetry by one of many
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Written on 2007-07-10 at 18:14

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Amanda K
you were very upset i guess, it's good 2 express your feelings.
2007-07-10


Zoya Zaidi
I use to get this dream, I was late for exams, and it is half way through when I reach... Yt, I was always late in reality too... Lol!
I can understand your anxiaty
But, don't worry, everything will be fine!
Get a good night's sleep before the exam.
Best of Luck!
(((Hugs)))
Love, Zoya
2007-07-10


Elle The PoetBay support member heart!
Good luck with the exams - I know that stressy feeling too well - your poems shows that hectic nightmare of running but not getting anywhere - thank goodness for that gate - seriously this was a good poem that got me as the reader panting to escape through that gate with you

Elle x
2007-07-10