The Violence Was In Your Love

Depressed in my loneliness
Feeling crushed in my soul
Hate leaking from my heart
All this
While my eyes grow dark
And my mind
Strangles you
With it's destructive thoughts

You did not hurt me with words
You did not hurt me with tears
Your violence was in your love
And made my soul scream
From terrible nightmares

You couldn't crush my heart
'Cause it was already broken
The only thing you did
Was tearing my soul to pieces
And the pain
Oh the sweet, paralysing pain
Is now killing me slowly
And without you
I'm facing an eternity
Surrounded with nothing but shadow's
And soundless screams
From the former passion we shared




Poetry by MoonChild
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Written on 2005-12-02 at 19:22

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MoonChild
thank u so much for that beautiful sweet comment^^ my computer alsow does strange things sometimes. thank u for commenting and rating my poem =)
2005-12-03


Sofiul Azam
sorry! I have posted my comment on your poem three times by one of my sheer mistakes; my computer that sometimes does abnormal things for me, for others like you as well, is to blame.
2005-12-03


Sofiul Azam
This is surprising that none can break anyone's heart which is already broken! Wow, how nice an idea you have given birth to! what a nice poem you have written to convey your emotions in a superb form of art which we call poetry.
2005-12-03


Sofiul Azam
This is surprising that none can break anyone's heart which is already broken! Wow, how nice an idea you have given birth to! what a nice poem you have written to convey your emotions in a superb form of art which we call poetry.
2005-12-03


Sofiul Azam
This is surprising that none can break anyone's heart which is already broken! Wow, how nice an idea you have given birth to! what a nice poem you have written to convey your emotions in a superb form of art which we call poetry.
2005-12-03


penfold18
There is so much in this emtionally it must have been hard to get it out but you have and thats half the battle, time is the healer but writing is the salvation and you have done well :-)
2005-12-02