A song dedicated to a girl i know. why can't girls decide that they like you or hate you and move on? (music in the works)


Gimme a break!!! (song)

Oh, the beginning of summer was hopeful, reproachful
And i was waiting to see
The next i could catch sight of your beautiful smile
See what you wanted from me

And we were talkin bout the strife in our life
Oh I was thinkin about you
And i was wonderin an thinkin in my head
if you were thinkin bout me too

(chorus)
Gimme a break!
An drop me a line
I wonder what went on in your head this time

So show me the way
An lend me a hand
I wish i could see you walkin this way again

Oh..

Then came the visits, the hugs, and the rides
I saw you out of sight
See the sun, your the one, let me come to the fun
I doubt we'll ever fight

But as we got a little close you could easily see
It wasn't gonna work
And as i saw you fallin' i was callin' and callin'
And then my heart gave a jerk

(chorus)

Oh i didn't here you callin my phone no more
So i got over myself
Thought now shes ran off her way, thought shes better to stay
The little green eyed elf

Everything was just fine, but i missed you in time
Then walkin' back you came
Why you gotta be confusin all these tricks and these rhymes
My life's just never the same

(chorus)




Poetry by Joe Fern
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Written on 2007-09-24 at 00:16

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F.i.in.e Moods The PoetBay support member heart!
yeah matters of the heart can be needlessly complicated at times... your song describes the effects ambiguity has in situations like that... :f xx
2007-09-24