Many times I've been used by boys... this poem is about the last time=(


Dream VS Reality

In my dream you touched my skin
In reality you dragged of my clothes
In my dream I was the one you could win
In reality I just was an old fraud

It happened so fast
You kissed me on my mouth
Touched me on places few men ever had touched me
I guess I could say I was paralyzed
You raised me up
Laid me down on the bed

Pleasure
That's what they call it
It hurt
But not much
And then it happened
The one and only thing that shouldn't have happened

In my dream you took care of me
In reality we sat opposite each other
In my dream you said you loved me
In reality you didn't even remember my name






Poetry by Tina
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Written on 2005-12-09 at 23:19

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Marie
Such vunerability. I love it. Guys can be so cruel. I guess girls can too, but you hear it more often with guys.

"In my dream I know love so well
In reality I gave up."

My own little addition. :)
((((((hugs)))))))
2006-02-08


tonsoku
very nice write! beautifully and subtly erotic, loaded with emotion and with a great twist that tied it all together in the end... well done!
2005-12-11


Zoya Zaidi
That is stark naked reality,
the last two lines are heart rending:
"In my dream you said you loved me
In reality you didn't even remember my name"
takes my heart away, it hurts for you! poor you, it can be vary traumatic, especially if it happens to be the first brush with sex...
it is such a delicate thing, it has to be beautiful the first time... Anyway don't worry, real Love will come your way one day... then pleasure will be a superficial word... it will be ecstasy!!!... Amen!
((((((hugs to keep you away from hurting)))))
welcome to our friendship Tina!
2005-12-10