俳句 haiku - xxviii


colors (haiku)


when colors collide
summer leaves memories

colorific fall








Haiku by Jer
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Written on 2007-10-05 at 01:34

Tags Haiku  Autumn  Color 

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Rob Graber
The second line (a syllable short?) plays the words very well!
2007-10-05


Kathy Lockhart The PoetBay support member heart!
lovely haiku.
2007-10-05


Rob Taylor
Interesting and beautiful imagery

Language: 5
Format: 5
Overall: 5
Mood: 5
2007-10-05