Misunderstandings


An accidental hug

The wall gave me a hug today,
-the big one, to which I
Whisper my things at nights-
Not to be kind or anything.
I just bumped into it,
And that's how it happened.
Would it be better to say it was more
A falling into arms of another,
Not a hug.



Poetry by M N
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star mini Editors' choice
Written on 2008-09-08 at 08:52

Tags Hug  Misunderstanding 

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Editorial Team The PoetBay support member heart!
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*Congratulations*

Your text has been chosen by the Editors to receive a Gold Star!

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2008-11-18


Thomas Perdue The PoetBay support member heart!
Congratulations on the Editor's Choice!
2008-11-11



This is delicious and I read it several times to taste it's wonderful imagery again and again...lol Made me smile a lot, because it's just what I do each night, I sink into the wall, I am gone...I am happy and I can be touched by only one.

Hugs are the ultimate in loving free bees and this poem is a real treat. Well done on editors choice.

Smiling at you, with a cyber hug from

Tai
2008-09-24


Kathy Lockhart
First welcome to the Bay. Second congratulations on receiving a Editor's Choice Award. Third, I enjoyed your clever poem dealing with the stumblings and bumblings that happen in the night. I have had my share of those accidental hugs too. I have had some bruises to prove it. : ) kathy
2008-09-09


Elle The PoetBay support member heart!
Ouch! Those walls can be very unforgiving

Elle x
2008-09-08