A WARNING TO THE HUMAN KIND


To be honest I've been better.
Every nerve has lost it's way.
If you were to find this letter,
I've decided not to stay.

I'm not sure where it went wrong,
maybe when I lost track of time.
I couldn't catch up or come along,
it was such a steep and scary climb.

Oh, I know I made it hard,
but I tried, I really did.
I fought and played the risky card,
and placed the highest bid.

To be honest I've been better.
Every nerve has lost it's way.
If you were to find this letter,
I've moved on to a better day.

Now I warn the human kind,
you're heading in the wrong direction.
Instead of pills and thrills and mind,
you should simply trust affection.




Poetry by Daybreaker
Read 962 times
Written on 2008-09-30 at 12:30

dott Save as a bookmark (requires login)
dott Write a comment (requires login)
dott Send as email (requires login)
dott Print text


Christian Lanciai The PoetBay support member heart!
Excellent! I wholly agree with Tai.
2008-10-01



Brilliant conclusion and do so agree....follow your heart. loved this honest to goodness write.

Smiling at you

Tai

Language: 5
Format: 5
Mood: 5
Overall: 5
2008-09-30