This is just getting a litte ridiculous

I am continually

Astounded by the sheer
Monotony of my life.

Seriously; this is getting
Obnoxious and

Uncontrollable in its
Never ending and meaningless
Bonds to different
Extra-curricular activities.
Life
Is simply wandering
Event to event, like a
Vagrant, searching for
A home, a place to
Be for more than 5 minutes before
Leaping off, with the expectation of
Youthful vigor that has recently deteriorated.

Truly,
I do not understand the
Real world or how it works.
Everyone is searching for success while I just
Dream of a bed...



Poetry by TubaGiant
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Written on 2008-10-02 at 00:21

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Kat
my life feels like that at times too, nowadays even the sleep isnt as fulfilling as it used to be...very well written. i love it
2008-10-02


Dan Cederholm
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I realy like this text, it have
something new, refrhesing
in the stanzas and the words
and the lazy feeling . . .

I think you have realy fun when
you write and I se the joy!!!

All the best, Dan

*APPLAUSES*

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2008-10-02


Rob Graber
I like the comparison of life to a vagrant.

PS: Note that line 2 needs "sheer."
2008-10-02


WildGoose
Maybe we could convince
Each one of our

Teachers to just let us sleep
Or maybe not...
Oh well, I think I'll take a nap...
2008-10-02